I froze. The handle jerked violently as I scrambled to shut Melissa’s laptop and grab the flash drive. My heart hammered so loudly I thought whoever was outside could hear it. I retreated to the kitchen, grabbing the only thing that resembled a weapon—a heavy cast-iron skillet.
The knocking stopped.
For a moment, the silence was worse.
Then a voice came through the door, low and calm.
“Ethan. Open up. We need to talk.”
It wasn’t a stranger.
It was Mark Rivers, my father’s longtime business partner and the man Melissa had apparently been investigating.
I didn’t answer.
Mark knocked again, harder.
“I know you found the drive. Your girlfriend made things… complicated. But we can fix this, son.”
Son. The word made my stomach turn.
I slipped out the back door quietly and ran. I didn’t stop until I reached my truck two blocks away. My hands were shaking so badly I dropped the keys twice. When the engine finally roared to life, I drove straight to the only person I knew would tell me the truth: my father.
The drive to Oregon felt endless. When I finally arrived at my parents’ cabin, Dad was waiting outside, pale and exhausted, as if he hadn’t slept in days.
“Ethan,” he said, pulling me inside, “you should’ve listened.”
“Where’s Melissa?”
His expression collapsed. “They have her. Because of what she uncovered.”
He explained everything in pieces. Mark and several executives from their company had been laundering money through offshore accounts. Melissa, working freelance in data analysis, had stumbled onto suspicious transactions. When she got too close, they panicked. Dad had tried to protect her by hiding her at the cabin—but she had vanished two days later.
“Vanished?” I shouted. “You lost her?”
Dad slammed his fist on the table. “They came earlier than I expected. They took her before I could warn you.”
I felt my chest tightening with fury, fear, and disbelief. “Why didn’t you go to the police?”
“Because the police chief is involved,” he said quietly.
I didn’t know what shocked me more—the betrayal, the danger, or the realization that my father had been living in fear far longer than I knew.
Before I could speak, headlights swept across the cabin windows.
Dad’s face went white.
“They found us.”
Dad dragged me toward the back hallway as the car door slammed outside. “Ethan, listen to me,” he whispered urgently. “There’s a second flash drive—one Melissa hid here. It’s everything. Enough to bring them down.”
“Where is it?”
“In the basement. Behind the water heater.”
Footsteps approached the front porch. A shadow moved past the window. I hurried down the narrow basement stairs, my pulse racing out of control. I fumbled behind the water heater until my fingers hit something metallic—an old tin box sealed with electrical tape.
Inside was a second flash drive and a small note in Melissa’s handwriting.
“Ethan, if you’re reading this, trust no one but your dad.”
My throat tightened.
Upstairs, I heard voices—Mark’s among them.
“Search the house. They’re here.”
I sprinted up the stairs just as someone kicked in the front door. Dad grabbed my arm and pointed toward the kitchen window. We climbed out and slipped into the trees behind the cabin as the intruders stormed the house.
For thirty minutes we hiked through the woods, staying low, staying silent. Finally, we reached the old service road where Dad had hidden a second car. As we drove away, he finally spoke:
“Ethan… you have to decide. We can expose them, but once you release those files, there’s no going back. They’ll come after you. They’ll come after both of us.”
I stared at the flash drives in my hand, thinking of Melissa—her laugh, her stubbornness, her fear in those final recordings.
“There’s nothing to decide,” I said. “We end this.”
Over the next three days, we worked nonstop. We organized the evidence, contacted independent journalists, and prepared anonymous drops. But before going public, I received a text from an unknown number.
A photo.
Melissa. Alive. Terrified.
Followed by a message:
“Trade. Tonight. Come alone.”
Dad begged me not to go. “It’s a trap, Ethan. They won’t let either of you live.”
“I’d rather die trying to save her,” I said. “You know I have to.”
I went to the meeting point—a deserted industrial yard—knowing full well I might not walk out. What happened next… changed everything. And if you want to hear the ending, you’ll need to tell me.
Because stories like this? They hit differently when real people read them.
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