The pounding on my apartment door jolted me awake at 5 a.m. I stumbled out of bed, still half-asleep, and opened it to find my neighbor, Evan Rourke, drenched in sweat, shaking like he had just outrun a nightmare. We weren’t close—just occasional small talk in the hallway—so seeing him like that instantly set off alarms in my head.
“Evan? What happened?”
He grabbed my shoulders so tightly it hurt. “Liam, don’t go to work today. Please. Just trust me.”
My brain couldn’t catch up. “Why? Is something wrong at the plant?”
“No,” he whispered, eyes darting over my shoulder as if someone might be listening. “Not yet. But it will be. And you need to be far from there when it happens.”
I felt a rush of irritation mix with fear. “Evan, what the hell are you talking about?”
He stepped back, still trembling, lowering his voice. “By noon you’ll understand.” Then he turned and practically sprinted down the hallway, disappearing down the stairwell.
I stood frozen. This wasn’t some joke—his panic felt too real. But calling out sick would mean losing overtime pay I desperately needed. I worked maintenance at Greenvale Chemical, a massive facility that ran nonstop. My shift was supposed to start at six. Missing a day wasn’t something I did lightly.
I paced for a minute, replaying the look in his eyes. Something inside me twisted. Against my better judgment, I grabbed my keys, got in my car… and instead of heading toward work, I drove to a coffee shop across town, still unsure whether I’d just made a stupid decision or saved myself from something unseen.
At 11:30 a.m., my phone rang. Unknown number. I answered.
“Is this Liam Carter?” a stern voice asked.
“Yes.”
“This is Officer Alden with the Greenvale Police Department. We need to ask you a few urgent questions regarding an incident at Greenvale Chemical.”
My stomach dropped. “What happened?”
There was a pause—a long, heavy one.
“Sir… were you aware of any threats made toward the plant?”
I gripped the table so tightly my hand went numb. “What? No. Why?”
“Because,” the officer said, voice tightening, “your coworker just reported that your name was found on a list recovered from a suspect we have in custody.”
My heart stopped.
I left the coffee shop immediately, my legs barely cooperating as I pushed out the door. A list? A suspect? My name? Nothing about this made sense. The officer told me to come to the station, but my mind was already racing ahead, connecting dots I didn’t want to believe.
When I arrived, Officer Alden ushered me into a small interview room. The fluorescent lights buzzed overhead. He slid a folder across the table, his expression unreadable.
“We had an individual attempt to enter Greenvale Chemical shortly after ten,” he explained. “Security stopped him when he tried breaching a restricted area. He became aggressive. When we detained him, we found this in his backpack.”
Inside the folder was a printed sheet with seven names. Mine was the third.
“What… what is this?” I whispered.
“A target list,” Alden said. “We think he was planning a coordinated sabotage or attack inside the plant. We’re still investigating.”
My head spun. “But why me? I’ve never seen that man in my life.”
Alden leaned back. “That’s the strange part. You weren’t at work today. That’s lucky for you, but unusual for your routine. Did something… persuade you to stay home?”
My chest tightened. Evan. His trembling hands. That terrified whisper.
“I—my neighbor told me not to go,” I admitted. “He said something would happen by noon.”
Alden’s eyes sharpened. “Your neighbor. Name?”
“Evan Rourke.”
He typed quickly into his tablet. After a moment, he frowned. “Mr. Carter, according to our records, Evan Rourke doesn’t match any resident in your apartment building.”
I stared at him. “That’s impossible. He lives right next to me. Apartment 3B.”
Alden shook his head. “We checked tenant logs this morning—3B has been empty for three months.”
A cold wave swept over me. “No. I talk to him all the time. He moved in two months ago. He works—he works nights, I think.”
The officer closed the folder. “We’d like you to show us the apartment.”
By the time we reached my building, two officers were waiting. We went to the third floor. My hands shook as I knocked on Evan’s door.
No answer.
One officer used a master key. The door swung open.
The apartment was empty. Not “someone moved out recently” empty—completely vacant, like no one had stepped inside for months. Dust on the counters. No furniture. No belongings. Nothing.
I stepped back, the hallway spinning around me.
If Evan never lived here… then who had warned me?
And how did he know?
Over the next hour, officers combed the apartment. They found nothing—no fingerprints, no signs of forced entry, not even evidence the door had been opened recently. Yet I knew what I’d seen. What I’d heard. What Evan had told me.
Alden pulled me aside. “Liam, people don’t just appear and disappear. If someone warned you, they had a reason. And it might be tied to this attack.”
My voice shook. “But how did he know I was on that list?”
“That’s exactly what we need to figure out.”
They brought me back to the station for a formal statement. I told them everything I could remember—Evan’s build, his voice, the scar on his left eyebrow, the nervous way he rubbed his thumb over his knuckles. Details came out in flashes, but the more I spoke, the more I felt like I was describing someone who didn’t exist.
Around 4 p.m., Alden reentered the room with a tablet in hand. “We found something,” he said. “The suspect we arrested… he wasn’t acting alone. And we believe the second individual had access to employee schedules.”
My pulse thudded. “So this wasn’t random?”
“No. Someone wanted specific people at the plant this morning. Based on the timetable we reconstructed, anyone on this list would’ve been near the chemical storage wing when the sabotage occurred.”
I stared at the names again. Seven of us. All scheduled for the same maintenance cycle at 11:45.
If Evan hadn’t knocked on my door… I would’ve been right in the middle of it.
Alden continued, “We’re still trying to identify who warned you. But whoever he is, he stopped you from being in the wrong place at the wrong time. And that makes him a person of interest—possibly a whistleblower. Possibly something else.”
Something twisted in my gut. “So he’s in danger.”
“Potentially,” Alden said. “And until we know who he is, we can’t protect him.”
That night, after finally being cleared to go home, I stood in the dim hallway outside 3B. The air felt heavier, like the building itself held its breath. I touched the door, half-expecting Evan to open it and tell me everything was a misunderstanding.
But the silence was absolute.
Whoever he was, he saved my life. And somewhere out there, he was still running from something—or someone.
Sometimes I wonder if he’ll ever knock again.
If you were in my shoes, how would you interpret what happened?
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