I thought the worst part was the silence—until my phone buzzed with a text from a number I deleted years ago: “Don’t open the door.” I actually smirked, thumb hovering over the reply, because Jake used to pull paranoid stunts like that when we dated. Then the doorknob on my condo door gave a tiny, deliberate twist.
“Who’s there?” I whispered, backing up into my dim living room.
A voice floated through the hallway, calm and familiar. “It’s me. Let me in.”
It sounded like me. My cadence, my little laugh at the end of sentences. It made my skin go tight, the way it does right before a car crash.
My phone buzzed again. “Emily, listen. Someone cloned your number. Call 911. Don’t unlock anything.”
The doorknob rattled harder.
I grabbed the heavy ceramic lamp off the side table and crept toward the entry. That’s when I smelled it—metallic and sour—coming from the kitchen.
The overhead light was off, but the moon spilled enough through the balcony glass to show a shape on the tile. A woman lay crumpled near the island, one arm bent wrong, hair fanned out like a halo. She was wearing my gray hoodie. My jeans. My white sneakers.
My throat closed. I stepped closer and saw my own gold initial necklace at her neck. An “E” pendant. The one I’d worn since college.
“Emily?” the voice called again, from the hallway speaker on someone’s phone. “Open up.”
The woman’s face was turned partly away, but the profile—cheekbone, chin—was terrifyingly close. Close enough that my brain tried to file her under “me” just to survive.
I dropped to my knees, trembling, and touched her wrist. Cold. No pulse.
Behind me, the doorknob stopped. Silence snapped into place, sharper than before. Then I heard something worse: the soft click of a deadbolt unlocking.
I hadn’t moved.
My front door swung inward a few inches, slow and confident, like whoever was outside had a key. A tall man slipped through the gap, phone held out in front of him playing my recorded voice.
He glanced down at the body, then up into my dark apartment and said, very softly, “Emily Carter… I know you’re awake.”I didn’t scream. I couldn’t. I slid behind the kitchen island, the lamp hugged to my chest, and watched a tall man cross the tile like he owned the place. Late thirties, shaved head, a thin scar through one eyebrow. No mask. That meant he didn’t plan on leaving witnesses.
He crouched beside the body and tugged my gold “E” pendant into view, checking it like proof of purchase. Then he pulled my wallet from the back pocket of her jeans and flipped through the cards.
“Perfect,” he muttered.
My stomach lurched. This wasn’t a burglary. It was staging.
He rose and I caught the other hand—small black pistol held low, casual, practiced. My phone shook in my grip. I couldn’t risk a ringtone, so I texted 911 with trembling thumbs: “INTRUDER. GUN. 14TH FLOOR. NEED HELP.” Then I turned my screen dark and prayed they’d read it.
The man’s phone buzzed. He answered on speaker.
A woman’s voice: “Is it done?”
“Not yet,” he said, eyes sweeping the living room. “Body’s here, but she’s not. Something’s off.”
The woman cursed under her breath. “Neighbors?”
“Quiet,” he replied. “I’ll finish and walk out. Same plan.”
Same plan. My mind snagged on that phrase. Whoever was on the floor was the “Emily” they intended to deliver to the world.
He tapped his screen and my own voice floated from his phone, sweet and convincing: “It’s me. Let me in.”
Not for me—for cameras. For later.
He moved closer, angling toward the island, gun lifting an inch.
I looked at the balcony curtain and remembered the emergency fire stair outside. I eased my fingers to the sliding-door latch, inching it up so slowly my wrist cramped. It gave.
The man paused, head tilted, as if he’d heard the tiniest scrape. He took one more step.
I bolted.
My feet slapped tile. I shoved through the narrow opening onto the balcony, cold air punching my lungs. Behind me he shouted, “Stop!” A gunshot cracked. Glass spiderwebbed and sprayed across the floor.
I didn’t look back. I swung over the railing to the fire stair and half-fell down the metal steps, palms burning, knees shaking. Two floors down I burst into the garage, breath ripping, and finally called 911.
“My name is Emily Carter,” I said, voice breaking. “And there’s a dead woman in my condo wearing my clothes—someone is trying to make it look like I died.”The cops arrived fast, but the story they walked into was already dangerous. I was barefoot, shaking, and cut up from the shattered balcony glass. Back upstairs, the intruder was gone. No forced entry. The dead woman had my driver’s license in her pocket and my badge clipped to her hoodie.
Detective Alvarez kept her face neutral, but her questions weren’t. “Date of birth. Social. Where were you earlier today? Who can confirm?” I answered, trying not to sound like a con artist auditioning for my own identity.
Then my phone buzzed—from the deleted number.
“I’m downstairs,” Jake texted. “Tell them to pull camera footage before it’s gone.”
Jake Reynolds, my ex, worked in cybersecurity. He showed up in the lobby and went straight to the problem. “Hallway camera?”
“Offline,” Alvarez said.
Jake didn’t even blink. “Neighbor cams. Someone will have a door camera.”
Unit 1406 did. We watched the clip in the hallway, my pulse thudding in my ears. At 11:42 P.M., Hannah Pierce—my coworker, my friend—walked up to my door, used a key, let the scar-eyebrow man inside, and left without looking back.
I tasted bile. “I never gave her a key.”
Alvarez’s voice went flat. “Then someone wanted her to have one.”
They found Hannah at the office the next morning. She sat at her desk like nothing happened. In the interview room, she didn’t cry. She didn’t even pretend it was a mistake.
“It was supposed to be simple,” she said. “A body. Your ID. An accident.”
“You killed someone,” I whispered.
She swallowed. “I didn’t pull the trigger.”
By lunchtime, Alvarez had warrants for my company’s system logs. Two days before the break-in, my HR profile had been edited: emergency contact changed, life insurance beneficiary updated. The edits were made using our CFO’s credentials, and Hannah’s account was the one that submitted the request.
The motive finally made sense: money missing at work, a payout waiting, and one employee—me—starting to notice patterns.
Hannah and the CFO were arrested that afternoon. The intruder was picked up two days later with the burner phone used to spoof my voice.
I’m telling you this because the scariest part wasn’t the gunshot—it was realizing how easily paperwork and planning can erase a person. If you were me, would you have run, fought, or tried to negotiate? And what’s the first thing you’d change about your own safety after hearing this?
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